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Grab Your Reader's Attention...
And Don't Let Go.
Want to hook readers from the very first line or ensure your short story packs a punch? My First Page & Short Story Review is designed to give you detailed, actionable feedback on your work’s most crucial moments.
What’s Included:
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Line-by-line feedback on your first chapter or full short story (up to 4,000 words, with more words available at an additional fee)
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Comments will be aligned with areas such as voice, prose, themes (for opening chapters, these will be notes on emerging or predicted themes), pacing, and clarity, so you know exactly what’s working and what could be an area for improvement
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Big-picture suggestions for character, conflict, and reader engagement
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A two-page summary letter outlining the strengths of the piece and next steps for revision
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Follow-up questions welcome—I’m happy to clarify feedback or brainstorm solutions.
Note: I do not provide review services for AI-generated first chapters or short stories.
Who It’s For:
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Writers polishing contest or magazine submissions
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Novelists fine-tuning the all-important opening
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Anyone seeking an honest, encouraging professional perspective
Rates:
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Flat rate for any length up to 4,000 words: $60 AUD
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Additional words (up to 6,000 words): $0.02 AUD per word.
(For example, a 6,000 word first chapter or short story would be $100 AUD.)
How Long Does it Take?
You will receive your feedback within 10 days of receiving your confirmation of payment and received first chapter or short story email.
Why Choose This Review?
As an award-winning writer, short story judge, and coach, I know what grabs attention and what keeps readers turning pages. I offer feedback that’s supportive and specific, so you can move forward with confidence.
Start Your Journey
For short stories or the first chapter of a manuscript, intended for those looking to dip their toes into the editing process or get in-depth feedback on a small piece of writing (up to 6,000 words).